Just down the street there is a house
with one window
that looks like an eye that never sleeps.
I walk by it everyday
on my way home from school.
I imagine the people
who live there
have one eye too.
But not like a Cyclops.
I imagine them like pirates
with eye patches, and crooked smiles
with yellowed teeth.
I walk on the other side of the street
afraid of who might see
my imagination
hiding behind the tree.
This is for Magpie #52, thanks for another flight of fancy, Willow. Please check out this awesome writer's blog,
http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2011/02/mag-52.html
..'imagination hiding behind the tree' - great line!
ReplyDeleteyes! wonderful poem...very visual...in my mind's eye! (...and so, i had to read it again...with one eye closed...and it was even more fantastical!)
ReplyDelete((thanks for wandering through my little part of nature...)) :] laura
What a flight of fancy! I loved your verse.
ReplyDeleteYes . . not many responses used the tree.
ReplyDeleteyour imagination hides behind the tree?
ReplyDeletewow, love the imagery, well penned poetry.
you rock!
What a delightful read! Like a child in fear passing a house, having heard of the mysterious owners from an elder!
ReplyDeleteThis is so charming. What a treat!
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